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by IslaQuinn

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sirwoodcuttersirwoodcutter9 months ago

Loved it. Who doesn't have a bestie they love, who they'd love to love.

Bargyn1Bargyn19 months ago

Loved it! A few typos.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This story is INCREDIBLE!!!!! 😍

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Loved it!

bobt2928bobt29289 months ago

Very good start keep going.

pkp033pkp0339 months ago

🔥🔥🔥

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Memories of my best friend Dave, Thank You. Great Story, bring on part 2

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Too many changes of tense, stopped reading.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Loved the set up, and the way you developed the characters. The sex was Hot!

Inconsistent tense interrupts the flow.

Keep writing!

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Hi there! My name is Isla. I love writing erotica! I plan to work on a couple different series as I have the time. You can check out my books and erotica shorts on Amazon here: https://amazon.com/wd/e/B0CK52VJNK

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