All Comments on 'My Best Friend is a Domme Ch. 02'

by TwistedDejavu

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wish my friend our relationship like this, seems like a good bonding technique.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I think it's great story and I would love to read continuation of it. Would love to see her become really dominant and strict mistress to Conrad, to make him obedient to all her wishes and all her orders. Hope that sill

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awe, it was an enjoyable chapter. Too bad she didn't demand you bring the collar and cuff and a blindfold (what bondage kit doesn't contain a blindfold?) out after stripping to just your cock cage in your bedroom. Looking forward to the continuing story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

oh really like this progress of the development of her dominance over him, even though he was a long time guy friend. it's just to bad your story is so painfully slow. please keep writing on this story..

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great work! I'm excited to read more about Patty and the protagonist

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story, keep going!

MassiveluminarydragonMassiveluminarydragonover 1 year ago

more more more lots of fun possibilities here

TamaboneTamaboneover 1 year ago

Loving the story. The characters are believable and don't come across as charactures instead of characters. I think your pacing is perfect. The story evolves at a natural pace and does not feel artificially rushed like many stories I see. Although the spelling and syntax errors can take me out of the scene, making me try to figure out what you are trying to say instead of wha tt you have written. All in all I can't wait for the next part. 4 stars.

Cuckysubby47Cuckysubby47over 1 year ago

Great work man..wish there were more like in the first part...but still great

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good premise.

Well told.

Could have used some questioning while he was edging. What are you thinking about? My breasts? Would you like to see them? They're so sensitive. Would you like to touch them? How? Kiss them? Where? How? Suck them?

Four stars.

RegretsRegretsover 1 year ago

Their Relationship is just So Hot.

stevesthenamestevesthenameover 1 year ago

Damn, this is good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good premise.

But still all one-sided.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good premise.

Too one-sided.

She doesn't let him see her ass/pussy/breasts as encouragement.

Four stars.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This Four stars dude

LMAO

HeartfeltmanHeartfeltman8 months ago

This is a terrific series, but this chapter had a familiar scene presented in a well-crafted manner. It's about "turning the keys over" and all it represented to both Patty and Conrad. I thought their reactions were believable and consistent with the characters that continue to delope over time.

AnonymousAnonymous20 days ago

Still a good premise.

But needed dialog during edging.

What are you thinking about?

Who are you thinking about?

Stop. Start. Slower. Faster.

Are you enjoying yourself?

Would you like to cum?

Don't you dare.

Four stars.

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