Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'My Best Friend Mark Pt. 05'

by koksocker333

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Rushed

No character development. No real story. This read more like an outline.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WHY

Loved the story but this felt rushed. Up to this point I was a huge fan. I still like it but this felt so rushed. I feel it was a missed opportunity for a great series full of depth and emotion and heart. Very rushed. Makes me truly sad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

i am SHOCKED that this great story was rushed to fast. what was posted in one chapter could very easiely have lasted another 20 chapters. a touch dissapointed.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login
userkoksocker333@koksocker333
302 Stories
741 Followers
I was born in a small town, grew up in a catholic home, went to a French/English school, after grad moved to different parts of Canada, eventually settling in Winnipeg, I am single with two cats, I have a very busy life, with work friends and working out. I enjoy the beach and...

READ MORE OF THIS SERIES

My Best Friend Mark Pt. 04 Previous Part
My Best Friend Mark Series Info