All Comments on 'My Best Friend Mark'

Great start, looking forward to more.

Mark needs an intervention and a rescue. It sounds like Tom might be interested sexually in Mark, and that they could enjoy themselves together. But first Tom has to wrest Mark away from that nasty wife Kim. She is emasculating and destroying him and his self-respect. She deserves to go! Will be interested to see how this story evolves.

Please continue this story.

This is an excellent start. Looking forward to see where you take it.

men can be battered spouses, too. And not just the small or skinny ones, either....

I know this is supposed to be a romantic/lost love kind of story, but you could make it so much more.

Good luck.

Sc8

My emotions are already running sky-high after this first episode.

Hey! WTF? Why stop there?

Can't wait to see Kim get hers!

I hope to see more of this story..

I found it. :) maybe we will have more and more? please?

You’re in serious need of an editor. I can see this story doing really well but there are far too many errors that make it quite and unenjoyable read. I hope you improve your spelling and grammar in future chapters as you are obviously talented, your work just needs a little polishing.

I second some of the other comments. You could use an editor. There are many things here that are simple typos that are difficult for the author to see. I know they are for my own writing, anyway. Things like "the" when you mean "they" for example.

On the other hand, you have the start of an engaging, emotional story here that is crying out to be finished. Looking forward to seeing the conclusion.

This series brought a tear to my eye. It reminded me of things that could have been and things lost. Bravo to you for such insight. I look forward to reading more