All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Crazy Fat Sister Ch. 05'

It's not just that Americans say "bathroom" instead of the word "toilet". The whole phrase "going to the bathroom" can replace the simple words "pee" or "shit".

I once read the phrase, in a kinky story no less, "she had to go to the bathroom in a bottle" instead of "she had to pee in a bottle".

If Zoe is so much more liberated, why does she close and lock the bathroom once Sean is inside and willing to play?

In general, maybe the story could benefit from going lighter on the musings about inhibitions and focus more on the pure fun aspects.

I can hear the “Jaws” theme playing as her period approaches...

Kinky and stinky . . . I totally LOVED this! Thank you for writing it,and for sharing it us!