All Comments on 'My Best Friends Father Ch. 04'

This is so hot.

I'm lovin this story! So so so so HOT!!!

Now I will have to go back and read the first 3

Oh Mr. P. MORE MORE MORE PLEASE... wishing I was Erika my dreams would be fulfilled

You had a very good story going but you are trying to do too much with it. quit while you're ahead.

You can't just end it like that! Please keep going!

so good.

another very hot horny part of this very erotic horny story.

awesome writing briliant story . keep them cumming .

why do you need the fear? I was enjoying this til this chapter, like someone else said, took a wrong turn.

No way! I loved that fear bit in the car! KeeP going. Hot!

I just cant really get into it... I mean it started out good, but then... Sort of downhill from there. It certainly shouldn't be in the Romance section. Hah! Not anywhere NEAR ronance! The girl is overly crushing, leading with her hormones and pussy... The guy, huh, the guy is a piece of work, heh. He asks her 'is this what you really want?' But she has NO fucking clue what shes getting into, much less what he really wants. He's pretty much an ass. A polite, sometimes thoughtful ass, but one none the less! He's playing games and not telling her the rules. He calls her a slut, treats her like a slut and has from word go... Argh... Its just distasteful, I was expecting a naughty,secret romance with great sex. Instead we get, hell, I dont know where to begin! I was honestly hoping she would bite his dick off the first time he shoved her head down on him. Or punched him in the nuts the first time he squeezed her nipple or bit her lip so hard it hurt.

Does she appear to be enjoying herself despite the intimidation, borderline physical abuse, etc? Yep. (Well it is a story) Im just enjoying it less and less, though I keep trying even though Id rather move on to stories that actually belong in this section... Even if it is well written.

This story keeps getting better and better. Great job.

That ending was hot as hell 🥵