All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Fiance'

Good premise.

But too automatic.

Would have preferred Evan and Elaine together, with Leo just watching. Or perhaps directing the action. Two cocks in her mouth at the same time mean they're rubbing against each other. Not my thing. You really lost me then.

Three stars.

By far one of the best written stories of this type I have read on this site.

Make this hrouple series with mates Leo and Evan double teaming their woman? Officially a two man wife with MFM wedding night turned life

nope, I don't buy any of this. it is not well-written at all. everything is bland and not at all how people actually behave.

Fun story and nice build up with Elaine

It is so real, loved the descriptions, I am a lingerie junk, and love to sneak glances at woman myself.

Well written again

2 year tease…. What a great build up to the finalé. Great writing. Great characters.

OK premise.

But even the buildup to sex wasn't erotic. And the sex was similarly MEH>

Two stars.