All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Mom'

Well written, enjoyable read :)

Can't wait until you come up with a sequal with the daughter finding out and then joining in.

This is an excellent story, with the right elements of curiosity, sensuality, and sexualit. It has so much potential for expansion. Jenny and Emily surely have to become players.

(giggles) ... Very Very hotttttttttttt ..cant wait for more

patti

hot..well written...potential to grow this into more hot action

i just love this story. Its extremely hot and i would love to see a 2nd chapter! Maybe get Jen involved somewhere! thanks for a very hot read! xxx

I'm sorry, but I couldn't get into this one.

The best friend's mother listens to her story and then they begin making out? Not much of a seduction, is it?

And, later on, lots and lots of "porn-speak" between the women, just like in a XXX hard-core feature film. I'm sorry, but I just don't find that the slightest bit erotic.

Would definately like to see more chapters to this.

Wow what a fantastic introduction to some hot women. It would be nice to see the story expanded to include Jen, Emily and a couple of other older women. Love the story so far.

what can I say, fantastic,bravo, well done. Really looking forward to next episode

and I agree I want to see Jenny, Emily, and possibly the Swim Coach involved, too. (And maybe a sales clerk at the mall.)

And, I'm sure I mentioned this before, but I absolutely want more of My Daughter the Slut, too. So now you know, okay? So no more excuses, write it! *g*

Very nicely written, but I would love to know what happens next. Like with her friend finding out about her mom and jessica, and do they end up living together....etc

I really loved your story. I don't know what's different, so to say about your story that seperates it from the others, but I do know that it was very hot. I agree with the others, I would love to see her friend get involved as well as Emily. The only thing that really bugged me was that there were points in the story that you got caught up in the story and did not realize you either left out a word or added one that did not need to be there. Other than that it was so hot that it made me wish I had someone that special.

Great story, especially the risque events, Please write chapter 2...

This story made me very wet. I want it continued, but I don't want any friends involved, just Jess and Kelly. Keep it between them, if you are going to get Jen involved, have her fall for Emily, but please, keep it to Jess and Kelly. Very very wet right now.

I got thru half your story and I had a tremendous orgasm. My husband heard me, then came in and we read the story together, from where I first came. He ate me and I exploded. THEN he fucked me just like the story and let me say he EXPLODED. We loved the story.

T...Looks like you hit paydirt on this one darlin, I think we should change your nick from reverse to perverse heh*smile* You know I adore all of your work but seems you really hit on something more with this one...now go and finish up your other stories with such passion and detail. Of course after you give US more of this one. Love it! yep, got to know how the daughter will react...her parents..school friends...hell get the whole damn town involved. I loved that you had them kissing and holding hands at the mall and hitting the changing rooms together...brought back some fond memories of a long long ago relationship when i did just the same thing of course it wasn't so fondly accepted in the 80's...oh did mama show her age? lol...great work dude...i'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks and as always YOUR fan in what is left of SE Texas naynay

Nice story. I like your writing style and it's very clear to read, compared to other stories on this site. So my advice to you is just keep it up! 8-)

Hmm, how about chapter 2, then?

D'oh, forget to put 100 on. Ehh.

I think all of us girls have had crushes on a friends mom before. well atleast i know i did and still do for that matter! Awesome job!

Excellent writing style. Very nice setting up the situation. I really think you should keep it going for 2 or 3 more stories out of it. Get Jenny involved somehow, either with Jess and/or her mother, or even Emily. But, don't let it get out of hand. You know how these politically correct nuts are.

Excellent story line! You're a great writer. I will certainly look for other titles by you. I wish that I had discovered this site before you decided to remove your other stories.

Really hot and steamy. Can't wait for the chapter. I'd love to see how jenny handles her best friend & her mom being together. Love to see where you take this. I'll be waiting.

Very hot story, U need to write more chapters. When they were shopping I was waiting for a sales woman join them.

Maybe have Jess's mom catch Ya'll together and joins You, or have Kelly meet Jess after swim practice and have her coach join ya'll in the shower. So many possibalities.

Maybe the school principle.

...since Housewives at play

Another potentially beautiful story ruined by a fake dick! I wish the people who run this site would make a new category and put all these bi-sexual stories in it and leave the lesbian category for stories about women loving women, not men want to be's.

and clicked it. Worst decision I ever made. The author does an incredibly good job, and I am left looking at my own decidedly mediocre effort in envy. Is it porny? A bit, but not so much that you don't get a feel for the characters which elevates it into the erotic.

Aw well, at least I have the consolation arousal. Thank you so much for posting this to the site!

I greatly enjoyed this story and look forward to reading the other chapters!

Such a beautiful story, with great caracters, full of passion and love.

If you enjoy great romance, with no vulgarity, beautifully written.

I think you did a great job with this. I write stories too where the protagonist is a girl even though I'm not, and I think you did some very credible writing. I think perhaps I would have let us have a little more insight in their non-sex lives. What does Kelly do? Does she have a job? Why didn't they have a discussion about Jenny finding out? And Emily - 50 lovers and still in high school? That's really pretty unbelievable in a tale that's mostly very balanced. A handful of very little things that kept this from being a 5 in my book, but still a thoroughly enjoyable piece of erotica.

Great story, I loved it. Good job, great writting.

you need to add more to the story

Gentleness is always good the first time of two until you both get to know the other very well.

Keep on writing, okay? You have talent.

wow, when I read your story I thought you were a woman. Really great writing

All I can say is this was so intense and amazing. You are very gifted.

I love this story!! It so honestly depicts the thoughts and emotions that someone might go through while still making the story itself HOT. Most often on Literotica I read the hot bits of stories I like, but this story excited an interest not exclusively in the "hot" parts, of which there are many, but in the story itself. Please continue to write!!!

Very erotic and sexy story. Would love to read further adventures. Did Jenny find out about their love?

Although, there wasn't as much age difference, it reminds me of my first female lover, she was so kind and seductive, just like Kelly.

Wonderfull writing, new to this site but will certainly be here a lot more

Danielle x

Just awsome - need to go change underwear after reading this story !!

ALL I CAN SAY IS WOW! WOW! WOW!

Do more please

Wonderful story. Thank you for taking the time to write it and share it. Would love to read more. Would love to find out more about Kelly's motivations for the relationship...

Ooh Plz add more and add the daughter in to while u at it

to a potentially delicious series. Of course I want more.

I liked the little relationship development with Emily, even though nothing sexual developed. It helped show Jess' inner struggle with a clarity that her inner narrative didn't. The changing room scenes were a great prelude to the First Time scene.

What I want to see is how things work out with Jenny. Both Mom and Jess will have some fence-mending to do, for sure. I can imagine Jenny and Jess winding up in bed at some point. Mom might even get involved. The possibilities are numerous and tantalisingly erotic.

Well Structured erotic Story

lovely story - good story Line : Erotic and Engaging.

Ranji

1 of the best i have read on here would like to read the 2nd part

This was a great story I hope there is another part to it if so plz let me know I would love to read it

It was such a hot read....I really hope for another chapter. It was really good

This is probably the best story I read on here please make another part this was so hot I loved it

Pretty good story but you rushed the part of her losing her virginity. The story reminds me of when my best friends mother seduced me after I had graduated from school and went to work in the office at the company that she owns. It was a slow seduction as she mitulicsey went about getting me to the point of wanting her as much as she wanted me.

From the first time that we went out on a real date until the time that I surrendered myself to her and she took my virginity was about three months. Looking back on it she had very slowly made me feel like a complete woman little by little. She was always complimenting me on my looks and showing me off to all of her friends. I was her trophy girlfriend and when the night came and I knew that she was the one who I wanted to give my virginity to it was a night that I will never forget.

My only regret was where it happened. It was in a gay club in a big over stuffed chair with dozens of other people around us. She kept on assuring me that no one was paying attention to us and it was really dark so even if anyone was looking they wouldn't have been able to see what we were doing.

The point that I was trying to make before I went rambling on is you should have led up to Jessica losing her virginity with Kelly and took some time telling about how Kelly got Jessica turned on and ready for her seduction of her losing her virginity.

Take it from me there is a lot that goes into a girls first time having sex with a object inserted into her vagina. I know because I lived it. The pain and the emotions are endless. You could write a whole chapter about the first time and still not tell about everything.

Thanks for the story but it could have been better.

Betsey

Dude that was fucking intense. Talk about hot mom. Would have been better if both women in the last sex scene were wearing stockings. Makes the whole thing sell as sexy and total lesbian chaos waiting to happen. But it was altogether a great work of words. Well done.

Very Good story: a good base for at Least one or more Follow-up Stories.

Would be interested is reading more parts to this story :)

This story was the best I ever read in my life

What kind of a sex life did Kelly have with her husband?

continue

The way that you wrote it made me feel so much like it was happening to me.

Except for a few little things like "How could they fall in love with each other as fast as they did ",

I think that you could have tried to show how they fell in love slowly and became intimate as they were falling for each other instead of the wham bang way that you described it

I really liked the story except for that.

had to stop and do a 'cool down' and still had a good cum. thanks, very well written.

Addressing the love affair with the daughter/best friend. Is she hostile? Want to join in? Etc.

Then at Miami you could address the tall/small issue. At 4'8" and A Cup Jess certainly qualifies for the small. Perhaps a volleyball or basketball player would be the tall. Also, they might be roomies as the Coaches want Jess's drive to infect a withdrawn submissive player that would otherwise be a star and potential pro.

That was amazing. That has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. I want you to make another chapter I want to see how it ends?!!

I really enjoyed the young girl exploring a lesbian relationship with another women, and her GF Mom.

BUT....did you really need to go to the "I love you, would you be my "Girlfriend"? level. Cmon, Mom should have enough maturity to realize that becoming an item with a 20 year old AND best friend of her own daughter......

Down hill RIGHT THERE.......

Since you haven't published anything here in 12+ years, not sure you will see this but, should you take pen to paper again, it would be great to hear this story from Kelly's perspective. It seems she was quite ready to jump-start the relationship, which begs the question of her previous experiences. Just my 2 cents...

That story was so charming and sexy that it is my new model of free and worry free desire and love exchange. Kelly is such a careful teacher and and the young narrator such a trusting and self assured virgin lover that this story might well comprise a chapter in the mature sexual behavior education curriculum.

I hope for more stories from this artful communicator of desire. Thank you! George S ghspangler@gmail.com

WILL KELLLY GET JEN'S CHERRY AND MAKE A 3SOME.

Very very Hot ....

Why isn’t Jenny named Stacy?

There are a number of errors that disrupt reading this story.

I loved it all!!

Loved the story but was out off with the bad grammar. It has so many missed words that makes it harder to concentrate on the storyline.

Try getting stories proof-read before posting, it will improve the stories quite a bit.

I liked the start of the story but found it too much bother to try and concentrate on it.

The grammar is so bad it was easier to skip it. There's too many stories out there to bother with poorly written ones.

There's promise in your writing abilities, you just need the stories proof read before posting.

One of the best stories I have read. Even though I'm into completely different desires, I couldn't stop reading. And it made for a very nice cum if I do say so myself.

Omg this was a damn good read please continue the story further!!

A deliciously sexy tale!

This story is hot.

wow love the story so did kelly tell her daughter or didher GF say that they were lovers n did jenn join in ?

Well I liked it. Cant wait for the daughter to discover her best friend is her Mom's girlfriend. More to meets the eye I see possibly!

Just moved to my G.O.AT. folder on a reread.

"Figures. Guys always let their little head do the thinking for them when it comes to girls," Ms. Tyler

Figures - manflora manhaters always justify turning girls lez because men want sex and lesbians don't. And the only way to prove that Lesbians are above horniness is to have sex with girls that have broken up with their boyfriends.

You can tell when stories written by men as the author always obsessed with shaved bald or nearly shaved bald vaginas. Bald vagina is pre pubescent. It’s not attractive. It’s not adult or even cleaner. I can’t imagine someone wants to look not an adult to be “sexy”.

I found it to be a well written and paced story. Some of the elements didn't seem necessary (yet) though I hope they show up in the future such as the friend from detention. Looking forward to reading part 2.

Finally I want to say that having seen some of the other comments, my advice is to ignore the blanket hate from some readers. Criticism and feedback should be critically reviewed but the rest forgotten (deleted if possible) as it's simply people trying to feel big by putting others down.

just wonderful true loversxx

A good proofreader would be of great help, missing or wrong words being used. As it is, it' makes it much harder to concentrate on the story.

I LOVED it I was hard as $10.00 worth of jaw breakers. I'm wondering what is going to happen once Jenny gets back home from her Fathers. Also , will Emily become part of Kelly's and Jessica's relationship. I will have to buy more paper towels so they be by my laptop. Imay need a good supply!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Overall a good and sensuous story! I would agree that a proof reader or editor would help reduce your need to worry about grammatical issues and just give us MORE content. I'm interested in how Jenny will respond, but think Emily being added as a 'third' would cheapen the love relationship already curing like concrete!

Those that write negative e comments and post as anonymous are just SO not worth reading

This has to be one of the sexist story ever, I loved it.

Wow, that was extremely intense story. Please do continue it like to know more. What happens when she goes to college she go to college? Does Jenny find out? Does Jenny join in the fun to remain in the next chapters? I hope I am really looking forward to it. I like your other stories a lot as well, I just wish you would’ve continued but I know with the lack of response who you’re writing to that’s probably the main thing well that one fella here that loves these type of things I am into these type of stories, so please give me a favor keep on writing Thanks I appreciate it Joe

This was released literal before my mother gave birth to me LOL now here I am reading this and getting turned on.