by Phree267
Could have been a good story until you mucked it up with the violence crap. You will never keep a lady if you behave like an asshole.
That was no point forcing her.
She was already getting into you from the chapter one.
You just spoilt it...
I enjoyed the first and most of the second chapter until the end when he went all Dom on her. I don't think it fit with the story and went down hill fast from there.
Starts off with a good story line but went down hill from there. Don’t waste anybody’ time with another chapter
Clean it up, you forced her, now let her adjust to you and come to you and then rock her world. I more forcing unless she asks for it.
I'm really sorry I read the first two installments now. Major bummer you turned out to be a rapist.
Next chapter should have husband and “friend” both being thrown in jail! You need help!
I agree with most comments above. Was a good premise initially, but descended into violence and rape! Also the grammar leaves lots to be desired.
Wanted to like it but ended up otherwise.
Damn everyone in the comments are so pathetic and Whiners, I think it’s a great story so far plus that’s all it is it’s a story of fiction these characters don’t exist so everyone chill out. Saying this author is a rapist is extreme wow!