All Comments on 'My Best Friend's Wife'

by NC_Coastal

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
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Too fast, unrealistic, sorely disappointed. .

WordcraftWordcraftover 4 years ago
NOPE, SORRY!! WRONG CATEGORY

This belongs in erotic couplings or loving wives, not romance. No where is love mentioned, hinted at, or exampled, and there is no build up in a relationship. The ending lead me to believe the relationship would end when blue the pills ran out. Read some of DreamCloud's stories to get an idea.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My 2 cents

I agree with the other comments. There was not much romance in this story. Not a bad story, but not in the right category. Thanks for your time and imagination.

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48-year-old writer from the South. Love erotica and have wanted to write like this for years. I have a big imagination and love to chat and cam. Just discovered the chat room here. I'm a work in progress, into everything and love to play online. Pics for pics. Open-minded.

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