All Comments on 'My Birthday Weekend'

by Fantasymaybereality

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Well, Fantasymaybereallity, you described an unplanned first time beautifully. Sometimes it just happens, and it can far more exciting that way rather than something that's planned out. I know it certainly was in my case. This was a great story and very well written. I hope you're going to continue it with future chapters. Thanks, MLF

Tinman714Tinman714about 2 years ago

Short and sweet. Here I sit with a hard on. Thank you!

jonkingbrothersjonkingbrothersabout 2 years ago

Most married men would definitely see their lives improve if they just had a Kevin in their lives. Good story - I hope you write more soon!

RobJasperRobJasperabout 2 years ago

Smooth, sexy and hot story! Hope you keep on writing more chapters!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago
Good, but too short

Enjoyed it but once Kevin opened up that middle aged virgin boi pussy he should of spent round two really giving it a workout. It's clear that he just opened up Mr. G for a lifetime of cock.

FantasymayberealityFantasymayberealityalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you all for the reviews. Definitely the confidence booster I needed to think of and attempt more stories. Now if I could only turn my fantasy into a reality. ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

I need a "Kevin".

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

Has your fantasy become reality?

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