All Comments on 'My Bookstore Encounter with Xiu'

by pbarkley

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kiwi857kiwi8577 months ago

Great premise but needed more development— way too fast and because of that it was not very believable

pbarkleypbarkley7 months agoAuthor

@kiwi857, Thanks for the comment! Perhaps I'll give a shot at expanding the story!

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