All Comments on 'My Boss's Daughter Ch. 01'

Nice slow intro. Hope you are as patient with her training.

the story i read really got me hot, slow and easy, not rushing this young woman into anything that she might not be able to accept.

this was a perfect way (in my opinion) to start someone into the world ob BDSM

please continue this story and let us see how far she is willing to go, and how far he will take her.

It's a good first try. The characters are good and you gave good descriptions. But you really need an editor to help with the grammar and punctuation. Not to mention it might be helpful if you do a proof read before you send it off. And why is it in this Topic? Except for the movie at the end, I didn't see any other mention of BDSM.

I think it's a very intriguing beginning and will be waiting for the next installment. I know things were said about editing in another comment. I saw a few little mistakes, but nothing that warranted that kind of comment in my opinion. Please keep going, you made a very good start!

Continue this storyline?

Looking for the next installment lol