All Comments on 'My brief career as a smoking model'

i enjoyed the story, it was well written even though i guessed he was the client.

This was an amazing read with the anticipation of a sexual conclusion and perhaps marriage. When reading the "nude" photos exercise on the beach one could just imagine the sexual charge the men felt when caressing Sara's painted breasts. Their imagination was at full power when seeing the white painted panty hiding her snatch. They acted like chained teenagers seeing their first tits and hopefully a pussy.

While not full of wild sex this writing showed real talent and a worthy 5 star rating.