All Comments on 'My Brilliant Life'

Dreadfully immature, seemingly written by a 14 year old who has been reading too many stories. The dialogue is unreal, absolute total lack of any credibility whatsoever.

I really hope you will write a second chapter to this story that includes her getting pregnant by her dad, and also fucking her grampa.

Pussy slime? what a turnoff. Going to college pregnant doesn't make sense unless she changes her mind and does not go..

Completely horrible.

Slime? Not sexy at all. And they just took a shower and she tastes like pee and vinegar. Not realistic at all.

Don't stop keep going, I want to read more!

Just kinda long-winded, and so inane and raunchy that it just got stupid.