All Comments on 'My Brother Ch. 02'

Well written, really. You don't overdo it with her reluctance, you've got it just right. Keep posting, please.

nice story and some more ch. 3

You're good, but I wish you wouldn't making us wait so long!

I love your style! The writing is grade AA+, now its time to get dirty so I don't have to go to another story before I COME!

Keep up the good work I look forward to reading more from you naughty.

edayers

Naughty Baby Sis, I loved both chapters..I got a boner from reading them..Tell me that you are the little sis that Rick will totally take in all your ravenous beauty, and will get to fuck you, like you asked him too...MORE, MORE, MORE..

Very nice, very hard-making!

Lukas

My brothers slut is starting to get real raunchy- looking forward to the next episodes- your best so far with great promise, I coulnt get my comment on that one

Good story. Please continue!

You know you and meg are going to be 'tag teaming'......

Love the story, and the tortureous buildup. it kept me on the edge of my seat, and hard as a rock.

A very hot chapter. Great characters, I love the chemistry between the two.

NBS, I really enjoy your Bro/Sis tales. I do hope you will give us more.

COME ON NOW GIVE US MORE

Thats it? No more? Fucking wanna hear more from rick and brit...

please write some more , every thing is perfect in this story

Please write more i was getting turned on then saw it ended adruptly.

I am so disappointed in your stories. They are great teases, but you never seem to carry any of them to their conclusion. This one is longer than the others, but just as disappointing since there is obviously no conclusion especially considering the time since this one was written.

I wish I could have been Britney.