All Comments on 'My Brother Returns Pt. 01'

Oh you tease, leaving us hanging like that. More please and hope soon.

Not much of a plot with an abrupt ending.

Waste of time.

@Frankie1952 two new chapter will hopefully be published soon, hope you enjoy cliff hangers and suggestion haha, there will be many more parts of this story that will leave the reader wanting more.

I honestly like it but it's a little short and no smut, I don't mind but others do

I just want everyone to understand this is the beginning part of a series. The other installations took time to write and publish. Sorry if you guys felt it wasn’t erotic enough. Also, the main character is a freshman in college, can’t edit it without deleting and re publishing.

I hope you take this story further. And I hope also that Zachary and his sister can "hit it off" with each other as well. They are step-brother and step-sister, right? Since he appears muscular in his t-shirt, and I take it his is well-developed muscularly, let him show her his muscled chest and maybe even naked body. The older sexy masculine brother might have the beginnings of chest hair, especially across his pecs, to show her. He seems that he can be nicer if he wants to be too.

Yes, this is part one of a series. They are step-siblings. I want to cultivate a dynamic that is a bit standoffish- antagonistic based off the tension from a taboo relationship.