All Comments on 'My Brother's Bedroom'

by LeCoach

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

You know girls don't have Adam's apples right?

LeCoachLeCoachover 11 years agoAuthor
About the adams apple...

I'm the author and, yes I understand that women don't have an Adam's Apple. The story concerns a young woman reading Liverpool Library books which are full of very graphic and sometimes inaccurate dialogue. I guess this is confusing some people but it was intended to kind of send up those old "Dirty Books" Many of which I read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
ok

now she gets to experience two males by accident bro and friend

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Slight error

Chicks don't have Adam's Apples

jlarue1959jlarue1959almost 7 years ago
Julie ...

... she's a sweet one! ... ๐Ÿ˜›. ๐Ÿ˜˜. ๐Ÿ˜

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
taking care of your younger sister.

if it Were me Id tell my sister to let me teach her more about sex and to hold off on any more dates with mike, but then again she loved what happen with her and andy, that comes to the part of taking good care of your little sister. ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜€

PapaGolf414PapaGolf414almost 3 years ago

Beautiful! Really enjoyed your story, and the way Julie was able to seduce her helpful, but reluctant brother take her cherry! Julie's first experience with Mike was quite charming, and i liked the way she used her little white panties to massage his balls while he was fucking her virginal mouth. This story should really have had a sequel -- there is still so much for Julie to experience with both Mike, and her brother Andy. More, Please? and Thanx for the very nice read!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Made my dick twitch

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I began writing erotic stories in my early teens. I feel this is my calling. I try to write stories that are at least somewhat believable. I love women and don't like to see them victimized or brutalized. Yes, there are some typos and other mistakes in my stories. I'm not...