All Comments on 'My Brother's Best Friend'

Sequel right??

i NEED a sequel to this

Another wonderful story, Hannah :-) I look forward to reading more :-)

The story screams for a sequel! Lisa and Tom can get together in a more comfortable setting than a bus seat -- maybe a bed where they can strip each other. Maybe sexy tom has a dusting of sexy chest hair -- just what a young college man might have gracing his chest. They seem to have been focused on each other for some time. Imagine the great love they can share with each other in a naked setting! Keep them loving and exploding with each other!

That was very sweet, and brought back happy long ago memories of urgent surreptitious sex in inappropriate places!

Great! Want a sequel. Please

Sweet! Keep it up!

I am working on a sequel! Keep a look out on my page :)

A cute story of unrequited love suddenly coming ( no pun intended 😂) to fruition. Thanks for sharing.

Excellent story, quite erotic. Well done. Look forward to the sequel.

Excellent!! …. Part 2 please!!!!!

Great suspense and imagery. Keep writing.....