All Comments on 'My Brother's Best Friend Ch. 06'

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RedMockersRedMockersover 2 years ago

I so love reading about these two. But I know the drama is coming, and I get this bad feeling in the pit of my stomach. Still, I trust you and keep reading. Don't let me down! I want them to emerge safe and healthy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story, although I think it's more fitting for the romance section at this point. I have really enjoyed reading the progression of this love story, especially how Feline and Shawn's sexual experiences are expanding as they get closer. I know the drama and a bit of a tough road is a head with the creeper crew (as I'm calling them lol) but I am excited to see where you take the overall story. I hope you have a happy holiday and I look forward to reading more after Christmas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Have a great holiday. And Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Thank goodness she finally cleaned herself off after all the sex. Was she just walking around with cum running down her inner thighs? I know I've got to get a towel in between my legs after unprotected sex. I was also really scared of the UTI she was bound to get after not rinsing off afterwards. Other than that, I'm having fun reading this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Can't wait for the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

RU ok? Your killing us here with suspense, please don't keep us hanging.... 😀

LV4206LV4206about 2 years agoAuthor

I'M BACK BITCHES!!! (I don't meN you're actually bitches. I just got excited there.

Chap 7 is currently pending. I'm hoping on Friday the 18th of March!

Anonymous23 days ago

RU ok? Your killing us here with suspense, please don't keep us hanging.... 😀

==============> I'm not ok actually anon. After New Year's a lot of shit happened. It was hard to find time whilst in the right headspace to write a mostly happy, positive story. But I got 4 chapters done. Well, chap 8 is 90 percent done. But 9 and 10 are ready! Should be at least a solid month of weekly uploads yay! Thank you for being a faithful reader of my work!

Anonymousabout 2 months ago

Can't wait for the next chapter!

================>Well, anon, you'll be happy cuz chap 7 I submitted 2 days ago... ;) Thank you for reading my saccharine love story. :)

Anonymous2 months ago

Thank goodness she finally cleaned herself off after all the sex. Was she just walking around with cum running down her inner thighs? I know I've got to get a towel in between my legs after unprotected sex. I was also really scared of the UTI she was bound to get after not rinsing off afterwards. Other than that, I'm having fun reading this.

===============>"Was she just walking around with cum running down her inner thighs?" Well, probably more in her underwear and then all over Shawn's bedsheets. ;) I guess, writing from my perspective, I've been lucky enough to only have uti's 3 times in my life. One from sex. And I'm a big fan of cream pies. ;) I'll keep this in mind for future chapters. ;) At the end of the day, even though this is a normal world, reality based story, it's still a story. Fiction and all that. ;) The rules of the real world don't apply. Thank you for loving my story!!!

Anonymous3 months ago

Have a great holiday. And Thanks.

=============> I hope yours was good! And thank YOU, nonny! Chap 7 is in pending right now!

Anonymous3 months ago

Great story, although I think it's more fitting for the romance section at this point. I have really enjoyed reading the progression of this love story, especially how Feline and Shawn's sexual experiences are expanding as they get closer. I know the drama and a bit of a tough road is a head with the creeper crew (as I'm calling them lol) but I am excited to see where you take the overall story. I hope you have a happy holiday and I look forward to reading more after Christmas.

==========> The creeper crew! I love that! Do you mind if I borrow that for my story? I really hope you like what's coming next. Chap 7 and 8 are well.... ;) They're something! Haha Also, I agree. It should be classed as romance. That's probably where I'll post most of the rest of the chapters though. I did put chap 7 in fetish. Because of the bondage. Thank you so much for reading! I appreciate the feedback so much.

RedMockers3 months ago

I so love reading about these two. But I know the drama is coming, and I get this bad feeling in the pit of my stomach. Still, I trust you and keep reading. Don't let me down! I want them to emerge safe and healthy.

==============>Gosh I hope I don't let you down, Red! I look forward to your comments so much! Thank you for all the feedback, everything you say! Thank you!

The drama is heating up! Chapter 7 incoming (hopefully Friday) God I'm sorry for the long wait. You love reading about Shawn and Feline well I love writing about them! They pop into my mind at least once per day. I really love these characters. I was thinking to myself of writing several seasons/books about these characters. I was thinking a spin off with Patrick. What do you think? Thank you again! <3

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 years ago

Great story so far!

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