All Comments on 'My Brother's Bitch'

I was getting into this then you go and repeat the whole story again!!!!!!!

The story repeated itself.

Why the double print?

Did you read this before you posted it?

Déjà Vue

Good read.....the first time

We all know this slut is leaving with Joe......Hell Joe should probably take this cunt home to his parent and fuck her in the living room I front of them before turning the whole family into his submissive cum dumpsters

You don't just walk into a brother's house and fuck his wife. That's rude and hurtful. It also shows that you have no class and no respect for either of them. Brother needs help, not humiliation.

It was good. The only thing wrong was that you repeated the entire story.

Double check your entry..... it repeats itself a second time

Just FYI - you dupe pasted the story twice in the same post doubling its size and length.

Good as far as it went, but the opening begged a resolution, and you left that out. You got us invested in the players and left us hanging, turning a great story into just a good story.

Thanks to all of you that let me know that I double posted the story. I have corrected the posting.

Additionally I would like to thank everyone that took the time to rate the story.

Al

plenty of story left. please continue.