All Comments on 'My Brother's Keeper'

Love it! Please write a part 2!!

Good story for your fist one I hope you write more chapters on my brothers keeper/keepers some miss spellings and grammar but over all Very Good Keep it up LOL Reader in Florida G.

Wow - didn't see the ending coming! The sex narrative was a little lacking in detail/feeling and while you stated they loved each other, I didn't get sucked into their characters. Still, good plot and fairly well written. 4*

I really hope you continue this story. One of the best I've read in a long time. Also only the second time that I felt I had to both vote and comment on.

Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter, this really good!

Well done, please continue.

What a great “fucking” story!! 😈😈😈. Please tell me there is a series as they explore their relationship further.

Great for a first story. I hope to see the next part soon and other stories. Thanks!

Great story and yes like the others say make this a series.

A little short, but overall a very good start for the first chapter. Curious to see if more chapters are coming?

Hot story, it brought back some of my memories of my own sister

Great start. With the mom bombshell there at the end, you definitely have to have more to tell. And please don't be shy with the details.

He finds out the girls are lovers and doesn't do or say anything to encourage a show, either before or after? Or DURING?

AND he outs mom without her consent?

Hope he can keep his mouth shut about sis while with mom. If he came out and told mom, she'd be devastated and probably shut down their mother/son activities.

Now SIS could get a taste of mom afterwards from bros cock. A little light clean up job never hurt anyone. And sis comments how great mom tastes, even better than Amanda, mom overhears, and knows EVERYTHING and decides to turn the tables a bit.

Enlisting Amanda's help, she catches the sibs red handed, red faced and dives in to clean BOTH her kids.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Nice start for a first story.

A little rushed (for me) but still good. I could see a series out of the characters. I could also see some flashbacks (from Mike's point of view) and so many possible challenges in his first year at college with Amanda and his sister. Fraternity/Sorority Parties, Dorm or live with the girls? so many ways to take it. Thanks for sharing.

I could really do without seeing "GAWD" so many times. Feels like a teenager wrote this in some spots.

Mom got you a 5.

would love to read more chapters