All Comments on 'My Brother's Wife Ch. 06'

I hope Mike finds out and cuts Alex's balls off, and Dani mends the hole.

idiotic!

I want them both to be punished

They both are cowards and slut

We are, I suppose, going to have to read the previous five chapters to make any sense of this. Especially when they seem to be in several different categories.

I want Alex dead and mike to divorce that dani

Soo you finally put this shitty story in loving wife and look how many people love it. Oh right they think it's a piece of shit that your two main characters are assholes and want them dead I would say don't make another chapter but I know you did my question is what category will it be in because I know you don't have the balls to put it back in this one again. So go do your best to pass it off as something it's not when we know you just trying your hardest to keep your scores up. You piece of shit

Yes, the idiots are still with us as this author and his story prove!

That was good……just like the other 4. I am very intrigued.

Where are all the decent writers?

We havent had one story today that is even remotely close to being readable, let alone decent or, heaven forbid...good.

Its like the small dicked livin gin mommy's closet crowd all get together to flood LW with more inane drivel and idiocy than a Trump rally has......and thats a seriously bigly load of pig shit, kids.

Do you expect us to read the other 5 chapters? Really? Lowest rate possible!

Why wait until chapter 6 to infest LW?

These comments are hilarious. Story was unappealing though, don't care for the characters.

nah blood before bitches

Nice twist, but totally disheartening. It needs more to read please.

Where's the next chapter?

Where are the other chapters - there has to be more to it - curious where it goes

Please continue this, it is well written and a great story. I would love to see how you continue this. MOAR!!

Don't listen to some of the negative comments. I've read all six chapters and you are an amazing writer. I hope this continues as I'm hooked! In other words, more chapters or at least an end to this story.

Please continue this story its awesome

The comments here show how a lot of readers on Literotica have never been exposed to good literature. They want a story about butterflies, unicorns and rainbows where everything and everyone is perfect. That's not what makes a good story. This one is full of conflict, mixed loyalties and angst as a good story should be. Try East of Eden for an excellent example. I have given each chapter four stars.

Hate the ending or lack of.Two stars😡

Son if a bitch. That was disappointing.

You had a GREAT forbidden fruit romance going and you zigged when you should have zaggged.

Curious why you did that, trying to extend it into a longer serial?

Thanks for the first five parts. We'll try to forget the sixth.

Just discovered this has another five chapters that were never published on Literotica.

Search reddit for u/LydiaGetsWilde and you will see the story pinned to her profile. She also writes on Amazon but the books have more of a bdsm slant to them?

https://www.reddit.com/r/eroticliterature/comments/t0maz3/my_brothers_wife_part_13mfcheatcon/