by Ken Nitsua
Joy to read! So happy to see you sharing your words, your imagination, posting here still and again. Tell me another story Ken Nitsua ...
THIS STORY!!!! I really found myself engrossed in it. I read it a few days ago, and really had fun cumming all over the damn place.
But found that I couldn't stop thinking about the characters. Yes, your story is hot, sexy, erotic and all that - and for that alone you should be lauded.
But it goes deeper than that - at least with this reader. There's an honesty, a sincerity - a REALNESS - to this that pulled me in, made me feel as though I knew the characters personally, and made me want to know more. Not just in a "more chapters, please!" sort of way, but in a real "I wonder how they're doing?" sort of way.
Look, you're a REALLY, REALLY GOOD writer. As fun as this site is, and all that, PLEASE explore writing away from here, too. You have a talent, friend, and you should be rewarded for that more than just by comments and likes from a bunch of horny strangers, like me.
Thank you for a glimpse into Jason and Raymond's life. Being a fly on their wall was something special.
I loved this story and the slow seduction. Please continue the story with more chapters.
An amazing story! I have loved every part. It's a shame ratings are disabled on this, it is absolutely 5 stars. -Tysvm 😘
This was excellent. Got me and my cock drooling. It deserves another chapter or 2 about how Ray and Jase continue this only the 2 of them. Jase blows Ray as Jase's curiosity amps up to try new things. Take it from there.