All Comments on 'My Cheating Wife'

I did really like this story. but it needs a second chapter! Don't just leave us hanging there wondering how everything was set up and why. Give us a second chapter!!

Good work well written!

I did really like this story. but it needs a second chapter! Don't just leave us hanging there wondering how everything was set up and why. Give us a second chapter!!

Good work well written!

I did really like this story. but it needs a second chapter! Don't just leave us hanging there wondering how everything was set up and why. Give us a second chapter!!

Good work well written!

I did really like this story. but it needs a second chapter! Don't just leave us hanging there wondering how everything was set up and why. Give us a second chapter!!

Good work well written!

I hope that you plan to continue this story. I am loving it so far. Please give us more.

I musta missed something. I don't unnerstand WHY they set him up for rape.

Clearly this is a racist fairy tale.

Please more. Finish us off. The rest of the story.

Jim

I was enjoying this story very much and looking forward to it developing into an interesting plot.

Alas, the ending although surprising, left me feeling that you couldn't be bothered taking it any further, which is a pity.

I was enjoying this story very much and looking forward to it developing into an interesting plot.

Alas, the ending although surprising, left me feeling that you couldn't be bothered taking it any further, which is a pity.

As soon as I learned it was white trash fucking a Negro. No self respecting white girl will fuck a Negro.

when comes his revenge? You still owe it to us readers.

the writing is good; The "plot" if any is thin. Why this set up ? Not just for cheating I would hope. And when is his revenge coming ? This story is clearly not finished.

Ah from the UK, that explains the lack of balls and the interest in interacialism

Why would any husband put up with this whore. He must not have any balls.

Terrible ending. You could have went in many different directions and picked the worst one possible. No wonder you wife if fucking around on you. Loser!

good, up until the end! horrid ending - def. needs a re-write, or even better, an actual ENDING! it's like you just abruptly STOPPED writing....

Low-life cheating characters in a lousy fucking tale.

I have no idea what makes these jackasses think it cool to write half a story then leave everything hanging but it is nothing but a waste of time, and in this case, A COMPLETE WASTE OF TIME...

I got absolutely nothing from reading this...

This has got to be the most stupid story I´ve read so far: No plot, no sense and half of it missing. Waste of time

Ok? What was point of writing this, it had no plot, no direction,no eroticism, no reason to be in print. Try again with more effort. A story has to have a beginning, a middle and a conclusion even if that's left to the reader. What you have here is just a random group of thoughts tied together with no direction.

What's the story? Husband knows wife fucks her boss, boss' wife knows what's going on, why is he set up? This could be the beginning of a good story; but as it stands by itself if kind of......sucks.

After a promising begining the end made the story become one of the lowest I ever read....

One of the lowest and stupid...after he discovered the cheating of his wife, why didn't she simple divorced him and go live with her boss and his wife? That's what makes this story stupid...

The only thing that could have made the story interesting is if when the police officer asked him to empty his pockets he has a tape recorder with the entire conversation recorded, a proof he was trapped.

Any Android smartphone has a voice recorder built-in, I don't know about iPhones or Blackberrys.

CYA is the rule not the exception.

I second the "should have just dumped her"

Sorry but they didn't exist when the story was written.

I also second the "should have just dumped her"

Sorry, I didn't realize it was a historical fiction piece.

Get the rope for this piece of shit White Trash and her Monkey man. they both should be hanging from the big oak tree.

crap!

Majorly unfinished story 1 star

Please there must be more to this story?

My wife and I have traveled this trail a many of times 5

You actually posted this writing. there must be people out there who likes this type of stuff.

Not me so, I give this writing a 1, if I could give it a lower score I would. A negative 500 is too high, by the limited ratings on the site one star.

Really you actually posted this, you must have kept it a secret from your mother.

And that takes a LOT, around here!

Tripe; inane bullshit; if any district attorney were stupid enough to charge this man, having the boss and wife, along with the "victim" testify would destroy those charges, along with the company. That's why companies spend billions on lawyers and settle out of court 99.9% of the time. The chance of this scenario actually happening are non-existent. Why fuck up a decent story?

Was that a story or just a series of background notes from which you never got round to building anything?