All Comments on 'My Co-worker Clair Pt. 01'

Interesting premise.

Lost me when he gave a guy a blowjob in the bathroom.

Then, the rest zoomed by.

Two stars.

Oh My !

This little story had me wiggling, touching and remembering !

Yes, I have actually been in this situation.

Having once owned and operated an Alternitive Lifestyles night club, I got to know a great number of lesbians.

Butches, Wives, Lipsticks and Bi's.

I was actually amazed at the number of lesbians who came on to me knowing I am a male who lives life openly as a Femme.

Back to this story !

I think it was well written.

Had very few grammatical errors.

It sets up a great start to a captavating longer story.

Forge ahead author !

Well done: good premise, good characters (well, within the limitations of a 1.5pg story!), good pacing. Ended too quickly for my taste, could have easily added a small buffer of "the next morning..." to tease for a sequel.

Keep it up!