All Comments on 'My Cousin Laura Comes to Visit'

Not bad. A little rushed toward the end, and the sex was practically skimmed over. But it's a decent little one-pager.

with the other comment. Rushed. This would have been an outstanding 2-3 pager. Still not bad. Perhaps another chapter?

2 stars

DragonRider55

I'm primarily a photographer where the picture tells the whole story. Sometimes it's hard to remember that it takes a lot of words to convey the message. A picture really is worth 1000 words.

Could have been red hot .Need much more detail off them having sex and the end should have been then live happily ever after .

I agree with the comment before mine. The ending was rushed and the sex could have been longer. Three instead of four stars. I look forward to reading some good stories from you. Keep it up.

I think many of you don’t realize that Mark writes nonfiction.

Didn't have sexual thoughts about her, he or she was under 14.

Now confused. Title says cousins, tags say brother-sister. I guess being second cousins could be stretched to cousin, but not illegal incest unless in weird-arse country.

I enjoyed the story. I’m surprised you and Mary didn’t invite Laura and her husband for a decadent weekend

Short and perfectly hot.

Excellent! It should be redone with pics😉

Fantastic! So personal. So erotic. So well told. I love that the sex is referred to as making love rather than fucking. That is so much classier and respectful of the lady involved. Well done.