All Comments on 'My Cousin Tove'

I think you meant 'mattress' rather than 'madras'. Keep writing.

If you believe you're good with English, you're wrong, very, very profoundly wrong.

Enjoyed it! Mattress is the English word. Madras is in India

Potentially an English as a Second Language Student.

My suggestions include your downloading of a spellchecker programme. This would eliminate some, possibly not all, irregular references.

We also have a propensity to match terms to the subject. Usually we reference women's mammarys as breasts, plural. I acknowledge that a chicken breast has two sides; women have breasts.

The mattress has been addressed I a previous comment.

What might your ESL teacher think we're you to ask for an edit? Perhaps someone you know that is more versed in English might deity for you?

Your enthusiasm is appreciated and you will become more proficient with more stories written.

Keep at the stories, we want to read more about you and your cousin. Other girls too.

Hi, there were many spelling & grammar mistakes in your story. You would benefit from getting a editor or even proof reader before publishing. Well done for writing a story in English if this is a foreign language for you.

Uninhibited and topless, we all had that who teased. Fortunately you had one who pleased.

Too many grammatical errors to make it enjoyable

Obviously written by someone who doesn't have English as a first language so, not a bad effort. Certainly not deserving of the criticism from the morons who couldn't recognise this immediately: standards of education have slipped so much.

Anonymous. The only morons are those who think that having English as a second (or third, or whatever) language is a good excuse for publishing in English.

They chose what language to publish in, knowing it wasn't the best choice, so those who publish in English because it's their first language, but really suck at it have a better excuse.