All Comments on 'My Crazy Girlfriend Pt. 06 - The Wedding Shower Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Nice

animal99animal99over 1 year ago

2 sisters with similar names (LIZ & LIV -?) only became a problem in this chapter where both were referred to frequently, almost interchangeably while in the same sexual event. I lost track at one point and had to reread a few sentences to clear up my confusions. Good story and very good series. Many authors would have gotten boring by 3rd chapter but not you!

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I like to write. Sometimes what I write is fun. Following a massive PC problem I lost all of my saved work. So MCG honeymoon 3, and surprise will be delayed quite a bit.