All Comments on 'My Cute Niece Kelsey Pt. 01'
by Jason_Duval
- 13 Comments
Nesticover 1 year agoOhh my gosh… this is such a heart-warming, and erotic story between an uncle and his niece. It’s very refreshing, the plot is slowly moving forward. I hope there will be more chapters. Thanks for the idea and your gentle wording. More than 5 stars.
creativeandfunover 1 year agoI absolutely loved this story. it reminded so much of when me and my favorite female cousin would have intimate encounters without the family finding out about it. I hope there is a chapter 2?
Jason_Duvalover 1 year agoAuthorGlad you folks seem to be enjoying the story! I browse Literotica on occasion looking for stories such as this one, but never found anything that really checked all of my "boxes," so I decided to pen one myself. I'll get around to a Pt. 2 at some point, which will more than likely be the end for this particular pairing.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI noticed something odd about the story's URL.
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The title says her name is Kelsey, and there is no variation from that in the story. So, no problems on your part. However, for some reason Literotica seems to think her name is Shelby, at least according to the URL.
Anonymousover 1 year agoThat's the typical inconceivable story welcomed by chronic masterbaters. Made her sound like a child, kind of pathetic.
Anonymousover 1 year agoHuh, I must be a “chronic masterbater ” LOL
NEEDS A FOLLOW UP !
Anonymousover 1 year agoJason that was exhilarating - to say the least! Ya we're going to need a follow up or two for that. Like what happens at the aunts house now? Do they secretly continues this "relationship"? I thought this might go in the motherly direction also where they're sleeping in the same bed. And maybe mother walks in on the two of them having at it and joins in a threesome. So many possibilities. Thank you though for this - loved it!
Archangel_Mabout 1 year agoIncredibly sweet and sexy! Please continue this wonderful tale!!! <3
I'm not a fan of involving mom/grandma; the chemistry these two have is just too special to bring in other people IMHO. Still, it's your story and I will happily read any followup. :)
