by blowerjoe
You must be fairly young if you think 40 is considered mature. Try 60 and older.
Hey all! Thanks for reading. Just an FYI, this is in the Mature category on the basis of relativity. To 18yo Matt, 43yo Nancy is mature.
Thanks again for reading! Comments welcome. š
Very hot situation, and very sensual description of the seduction right up to the fucking scene.
Whew! Every 18-year-olds dream. Hot as heck writing, description. Made it feel real. Chapter 2???
Very hot, another young man, with an older, mature woman in need of attention.
Well written, this story has legs.
Superb writing. Great characterization, realistic dialog, very well-paced action, exquisite description. Terrific story of seduction and wonderfully hot sex. 5*!
From an old Coder, that was one error free, syntactically correct product. Translated? Helluva story, with excellent lead up and pointing to the best consensus: Like wine and cheese, a divinely cultured lady is consumed with fine wine. 5*
Great storyā¦ā¦.I can tell you a fact. Hopefully thereās a few more chapters to come. Youāll get more good pussy being a mechanic than doing whatever youāre planning on doing. My father had his own truck repair shop, I grew up in that shop during the 70ās & 80ās. When I was in high school a 30 year old math teacher/girls volleyball coach heard rumors from other girls that I had a big dick. She started flirting with me a little then one day asked if I could tune her car up some weekend. We made arrangements for her to meet me at dads shop on a Saturday. Dad didnāt care I did work down there on my car. Short story I gave her a stretching like sheād never had. We hooked up for next 2 yrs couple times a month till she divorced her husband & moved. Memoryās from along time ago. FYI - I still have the shop & life is great. .
Wow, really erotic, good build-up, enough characterization....
What happens next, and later, is in the reader's mind's-eye, but hopefully, also in your plans...
I didn't see this cumming when I started reading it so superb I came during g the middle and end of the story it definitely needs a second chapter 5 stars
There should be a 6 star option! Felt like a cheat only giving 5. Your fans demand more! Those of us that love feet were teased; I can see a whole story developing with just this topic. Iām interested to see where you take us, slowly. Too good to be taken there with just one more chapter. Thanksā¦
Wow a BIG thank you to everyone who read and reviewed this story! I'm so thankful. I've been getting messages asking me to continue with the next part of this and other stories. The stories are IN PROGRESS š„³ -- If anyone would like to read the early forms of these stories, or new ones I'm soon to publish, please send me feedback via my profile and let me know your email address so we can communicate. I'm always looking for feedback and would appreciate the ability to engage with you and help make these stories amazing. Thank you!
Absolutely fantastic! So excited to see you're working on the next portions of the story, can't wait!
I WOULD LOVE TO MORE OF MATT AN NANCY TOGETHER ā¤ PLUS NANCY LEAVING HER HUSBAND FOR MATT
Wouldn't mind reading another chapter to this story however to the anon who said wouldn't mind seeing her leave her husband for matt I don't think you understand what this story was trying to interpret either way having her do that in another story would just ruin the story however exploring the affair between the 2 more is fine and also explaining if she got pregnant or not
Typical uninterested, overweight husband that forgets anniversaries and only cares about poker with the guys (or golf or whatever) and takes the wife for granted. I can't blame her for cheating in a case like this. Does it make it right? No. But nor is her husband's blatant neglect of his wife. If he no longer cares to meet her needs, it's only logical she should get them met elsewhere. Of course she should just divorce the idiot but life isn't always as simple as we'd like.
(1/1/2024) Yes, divorce before cheating but she needs to tough it out for the kids. Matty will always be there on the weekends. Great fantasy, VERY HOT! Poor hubby. You snooze you lose. Very well done. Five stars from me and on my list.
Nice premise.
But too straightforward.
Needed to slow down.
Needed more step-by-step action/details.
Needed her taking some of the lead.
When you jerk off, do you think about me? How often? What do you envision happening?
What do you like best? Doing stuff to me, or me doing to you? What stuff?
Etc.
Four stars.