All Comments on 'My Dark Angel Ch. 13'

I simply loved this story and wow have you grown as a writer from the first few chapters. I hope you continue writing and I very much look forward to reading your next adventure!

Thank you Anon, I have noticed the difference to.

I do hope to go back and edit it in it's entirety.

And then likely see about publishing it as a single story on here, updated and hopefully alot better written.

Thank you very much Anon, I tried to give it the best ending I could. And I agree, my writing back then needed alot of work.

My plan is to go back and gut the first half of the story and rework it into something much more smooth. :-)

And i still have plans for Daniel and Oscar don't you worry.

And thus ended a chapter in James's life, and begins the newer, wider universe...

Bravo!

Is one of the most beautiful stories ive read here, Bravo, bravo bravo

you are an awesome writer