All Comments on 'My Dark Hunger...'

by FallenOne1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
No story and no plot.

Just a sex scene. You'll have to do better then this. It wasn't very interesting and wasn't much of a read. Need more creativity. It was but a stagnant, overdone sex scene without much imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
If you look downa t the comments you'll see what I have been saying!

annony hates everything. Sol I'm giving 5s to every fucking story I can find.

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