All Comments on 'My Darling Seducer'

It was a good story, but his sex with Eve made no sense. He waited 6 years for this woman to get out of prison. He was establishing a relationship with her, that hopefully lead to marriage. Why would he risk that just for a one night stand? Considering his desires for Lucille, and his will power I find it hard to believe that he would fall for Eve. I see it much more likely that he would get up, and walk out on her. Please don't insult are intelligence, and change the character's make-up.

i was a bit surprised - Robbie 'cheating' with Eva, i thought he was going to be murdered for unfaithfulness also!

good writing with the kid characters, although they got 'mommied up' a bit fast - i would have expected longer resentment and missing of nana......

Thanks for your comments. You should be aware that in real life people are not consistent, they often do the unexpected, the unpredictable, the out-of-character things. And this is what my character did; it was not a fairy story.

EgmonGrigor

Having read your stories and comments I have come to the conclusion that with your propensity for the norm - straight - predictable no wobble type characters you are most suited to romance novels.

What do you think?

The overall plot is okay, but hardly unique. Noticeable is a lack of passion or emotion in any of the characters; so little that I couldn't find myself being interested in any of them. In the end, the plot was not really enough to keep this from being a boring tale.