by Zappazappa
Over read it twice, and it's better each time
Thank you for this love story!
loved it!!! Her daddy taken care of her, helping out of the breast feeding..
this could be a great story with a little more detail and some re- wtiing . keep up the good work ........ write more too this please .........
Good story. Maybe just keep an eye on the references to the baby...it's not an 'it'. I'm pretty sure the baby started as a boy and then became a girl. Either way...you could use he/him or she/her...or give it a name.
Sweet story . one for the books . We need to hear about the children they have and their
ongoing happiness .