by blondechristine2012
That read like it was written by a stoned 12yo that knows English as a second language
What a double standard! She cheats with Philippa but complains that husband is cheating! Strange right? And then, as soon as he's out of the house, she starts a lesbian incest relationship with her own daughter? That speaks for her character! And of course it speaks for the spirit of the author!
I used to read and watch lesbian sex a lot more a few years ago -- that was before I admitted to myself that I'm gay (or at least "bi"). However, this story really turned me on with the incest angle and hot lesbian sex. Please tell more stories like this one.
Love the style, it had me hard reading it.
Keep it up, you are good.
What a wonderful writer. I adore the intensity, the passion, the eroticism and that deep, deep level of emotion.
Thank you for a truly beautiful read.
This lovely story needs many more chapters where mom and daughter explore themselves and daughter, which appears so far to be a bit dominate, begins to take over making her mother do more and more hot sexy things to the daughter.
This could develop very well into a very hot, sexy novel as so far, all seem to like this story.
Keep developing this story, as it would be nice to see the daughter really take over after time making her mom a real pussy slut for her. Nothing hotter then having your sexy partner naked on her knees kissing your feet, calves, thighs and then you shaved pussy. Damn, dripping already just thinking about what you could do with this story, hmm, more please.
Lovely Story,
5***** Stars for a lovely mother/daughter story!
Need a Chapter 02 or more!
Wet wet kisses
Aunt Helena
Marvelously wicked story... so happy you your work on Literotica again.
All mothers and daughters should experience such beautiful uninhibited love.
Well written? I don't think so. Look, I don't mean to be the grammar police, but you need an editor badly. A mistake occasionally can be overlooked, but at some point an abundance of mistakes is very distracting. And you reached that point often. I mean was her original bi seductress Phillipa or Pauline? Those type of things matter. It was not all bad, by any means. The concept of your story was great. You just need an editor so very much.