by bardsy
I really enjoy this story, I almost passed it up but am glad I didn't, the slow build has made the lack of anything hard core a positive instead of a negative, I love that you are putting out a ch every few days I love the characters, in conclusion I look forward to more of this story
Wow you have done an amazing job with the build up of this series, I do hope you decide to continue to do more as this is a great developement within the characters of the story.
Take an English class. Or hire an editor. "You're loss" -- puleeze. Stupid stories.