by bardsy
That was a very emotional chapter! I love what you have done with Kayla,Trina, and Meredith. This is truly an amazing story. I can not wait for the next chapter!!!
would love for you to continue the series theres still a few avenues that can be explored
Unless this is a true story and you have actually lost your wife to cancer then you really shouldn't have made such a big deal over it. It can offend people who have lost someone very close to then to cancer. Dick move bro
This has been fantastic so far, and I really hope you add more to the story. Chapter 12 actually made me cry a couple of times. And please, don't listen to any criticism about the depth you put into Cory's last year; it was beautiful, imho, even if it was painful to read. It was beautiful because the narrator's love for his wife shone through in every line of it, and in the pain of losing her.
I hope the story continues, though, so we can see more of how things turn out with Trina, Kayla, and everyone else.