All Comments on 'My Daughter's Roommate'

You ruined the story by adding the lifeguard party where the 2 girls sucking and fucking multiple dudes.

who sucks the golf pro's cum out of Mom's asshole in the sequel?

The girls have to be drunk to fuck him. What's sexy about rape? That's what it is when the female is too drunk to give consent.

You need to work on your English. I'd be embarrassed to put out something like this for anyone to read.

From a porn stand-point, it's a great story. It's hot and a great fantasy.

Four stars if only because there's just not a lot here except oversexed one-dimensional people. Almost no problem cheating on his wife, fucking his drunk daughter, etc.

A fine example of how not to write or, how to write using excessive exaggeration.

You gave yourself an extra inch or two and FYI, only about 5% of a cumshot is from your balls.

Maybe a lingerie fashion show from all three ladies in garter belts, stockings, heels with more dirty talk. The sluts telling daddy how much they love fucking. Plus a massive facial at the end. Hoping.......

Are the girls going to seduce Jill ?

Then have a 4some?

Is Jill getting some on the side to?

Shit story..that's all folks

"Are the girls going to seduce Jill ?"

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Frankly, the way this was going, while it may have been a little hard since this first person from his POV, I have expected that when he first fucked Jessi, Sara had sneaked off (or Jill did wake up and discovered them) and was 69ing with Jill.

Good story, decent horny characters getting their fuck on. In the future, more consent, please! Drunk people are iffy, sleeping people definitely can't consent.

Keep writing, keep learning!

-y4

nice hot sexy as fuck story.

I absolutely adore cunt in every way, especially cuts that squirt lots of cunt juice. I just love to get drunk on cunt juice and fuck one cunt while eating another and some times even finger fucking a third, all of us wallowing in cunt juice and cock cream. Cunt crazed fucker Lancashire, UK.

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hawt, haWT, HAWT!

11/10!!!!!

Great story. Loved it!

Love this story. I can just feel the sex between the girls and the father. I would love to be the father.

Wow! That was a very hot story. I guess the dad was definitely an ass man! He even liked a couple if fingers up his own ass. Awesome story. Well done.

D& A