All Comments on 'My Day at the Mall Ch. 05'

Wow! Wayne that was something special! Maggie is in for a great time if the 'old veteran' with shrapnel in his knee can continue to perform as he has so far. But we digress! What the hell has happened to the real story? Chapters 04 & 05 have left us, and the story, hanging while our hero gives Maggie a fantastic fuck. OK Wayne, it is time to get on track and back to business. Chapter 06 ASAP please! Pete.

And welcome back. I thought you had abandoned this story, so it is good to see a new chapter. And what a chapter, hot, damm hot. Hope to see more soon. John B.

would love to see more of this story when is the next chapters coming

What a passionate way of describing their taking it to the limit...so to speak! Am enjoying this series a lot.

Sounds like 👍 a superb time!

Good stuff

5/5

1 star. Unfinished, won’t be finished, series