All Comments on 'My Demands'

Another truly incredible story! I can't wait to read more!! Please keep them coming!

Call it the double-edged sword, but I would have been disgusted if the gender was reveresed and this was a male blackmailing a female.

As it stands, your protagonist seeps of all sexual energy. But I enjoyed the time in her head, and the tingles the story gave me.

You continue to amaze with me your stories! You write way beyond your years with such description and clarity that I can envision being there watching you! Well done.

Bill

loved the story!!!totally got me off!! cant wait for more!!

Once again an amazing story! Very Sexy!

that was incredible 50/5

"My Demands:" - As well developed the theme is--fantastic sexual blackmail--the best is surely yet to come with the continuing Chapter 02. My favorite total reading of leisure pornographic stories is almost entirely blood-kin female/male incest. As an after thought, upon scanning the writer's story index I felt this story might be a good change of pace...and so far it's a phenomenal change of pace, and more! The deviousness and suspense that is prevalent is awesome!

Not to be critical, but to offer constructive caution. The word "throws" should be "throes" at the top of page two (2)...if I remember correctly; Those seldom used type words are more difficult to catch than the likes of "there" vs "their" vs "they're," or "hear" vs "here," etc.

Now, on to Chapter 02 for, I'm sure, what will be an awesomely exotic, sexual-laced and well loaded with sexual emitting visual epic.