All Comments on 'My Dominant Woman'

This is a favorite fantasy of mine, being ordered to walk through a door naked when you don't know who's on the other side. Would love to see where it goes.

Really?

Try to avoid grammatical mistakes in erotica, it just kills the vibe; aside from the mistake I've copied-and-pasted below — the "mistake" part is in double parentheses — I didn't find any other major ones. Good read, otherwise.

"I would end up coming not long after she did and as ((I did she was take my load)) on her face and tits."

wish you had at least finished the first chapter