All Comments on 'My Dream Girl Sister'

Pretty well written story !

More a fantasy to most but enjoyable to some, a happy ending is a good thing to enjoy.

Good show author.

That was a great story.

Could have been good, in fact it is in some places, but generally it is mawkish and irresponsible and lacks credibility at the end.

Did the finish college or just go to work at Walmart?

Nice story. Wish you had clarified that they were both virgins, still 5/5.

Well written and done. 5 stars for creativity and the ending being different than the normal never tell the parents or parents blasting them for getting pregnant. Keep up great work.

Keep up the good work

a beautful story of love

Would have been much better if they blood brother and sister. I realize it is "Taboo" but its really just romance, so disappointing for me.

loved it

Story was immediately ruined by you announcing that he was adopted. No real incest between blood related people occurred.

Just a little thought, but it would be interesting to read about how the pair managed to survive and raise young ones.

Maybe a follow-up? I will keep an eye out for a second or more parts before voting.

Think yjis was a good story with a nice build up. Ending worked out well and surprising.

In this category, adoptive siblings are a total cop out. It's a cute story though.

I gave you a five in spite of the fact that I don't really consider this to be an incest story. The may have grown up in the same family, but Doug and Carley share every bit as much of the same DNA as a Stepbrother and Stepsister would, which is zero. I'm sure that in many states that they could legally marry. 5/5

In the end I thought the parents were the weird ones.

Well finally, a refreshing storyline of family love.

I concur with quite a few of the comments. They aren't blood, so not incest. Total cop put. Would be perfect if they actually brother/sister. Could go in Romance or Erotic couplings and be just fine. Also tagging it as incest is like tagging LotR as Sci-fi.

>Second paragraph already mentions adoption

Dropped

Very hot! This couple certainly knew how to fuck.

Aww that was beautiful and hot. Their parents' reaction was surprising, though honestly should be the default (of course that'll likely never happen sadly). I wonder if they'd have reacted differently though if they were true blood relatives. It was interesting that Carley felt the same way as Doug the whole time - did they save themselves for each other? I don't think that was explicitly mentioned. It seems like they would have given their feelings, and yet... Still, it was a great little story. A chapter two would be awesome though I think it's clear they'll have their happily ever after.

I really love the idea of a whole life long love affair, from birth to the end.

Well done, thank you

Nice story. Nothing wrong in them having sex and getting married. They aren't real brother-sister after all. Not related by blood. So not incest. No legal complication, no medical complication.

This was a fun and enjoyable story to read.

thank you thank you thank you Lovely story and very well done.

I absolutely loved it

I stopped reading as soon as I read no blood relation. Not what I come to this section for.

Loved the story. AAAAAA++++++

Somewhat predictable but well presented with two very likeable characters.

The bones of the story are good but it probably would have been a lot better if it were longer. Cut down the number of sex scenes but make them more descriptive or give each big event its own section if not its own chapter. Dialogue could use some work sounding less robotic as well.

Loved it. I love babies coming into a close loving family.