All Comments on 'My Education Ch. 03'

I thoroughly enjoyed this series and hope you continue with it.

Crossing my fingers that the officer mentions rhubarb

I sincerely hope that you are still monitoring these comments and will some day return to Literotica and allow us to read more of your excellent stories. Thank you for what you have posted so far.

It is a great shame that it was never finished

Justin already had his 20th birthday, can you please stop picturing him as 19. Its a small detail, but it's a big detail.

Absolutely ace. Cracking storyline with great detail throughout. Hope you're monitoring these comments as being a fantastic story you've left it open to be continued although it looks like too many years have now passed. Shame but thank you for a great read.

Great story with an amazing plot, i just pray that you will finished it one day.

My only issue with the story is how controlling Erin is, she acts like she is his mother and I don't see a long term relationship working that way. She setup the assistant job for him without asking or even telling him about it, even including his dad in the process. He was all but moved in the townhouse before he even knew about it. Then she asked Sarah to move in with him without asking if he was ok with it. While that was what he wanted, she didn't know that and just did it. Then she setup the three-way without asking if he would even want to and if he would want her friend. While all of these are good things for him or almost any guy, what happens when they are not.

This was a very interesting a great story, I read from the beginning but only commented after I finished the whole story... As for Anonymous stating Justin was 20, Read again. He was 18 when it started. Just pointing out the Facts. Super Story. Would Love to read the rest

Unfortunately, the author NicholasTemplar, passed away in 2013. RIP.

Please continue this series, it’s awesome!!!

Love the story, and this chapter opened the story up for quite a lot of possibilities, including wex with not only friends of Erin, but also with 1) Officer Debra Coles (although probably not a threesome, due to the need to conceal Erin's relationship with Justin), 2) Sarah (set up by Erin after discovering Sarah is interested in Justin), 3) Possibly sex with Michelle.

Unfortunately there have been no new chapters for more than 12 years, and an Anonymous commenter says the author died in 2013.

Perhaps someone else could carry on the story. While it would be good if someone with access to NicholasTemplar's 4th chapter could publish it, this seems unlikely to happen, so they'd have to carry on from here - the end of Chapter 3.

Hey guys, this story appears to be abandoned, with the author allegedly dead.

If any of you know are or know a good author willing to continue the story, I'm sure that such a continuation would be greatly appreciated. I suggest keeping the title the same "My Education", or "My Education (continued)", and posting a comment here so people can find it.

Also, if continuing the story please notify RedHairedandFriendly, as I have asked her to find an author, and don't want conflicting continuations (although I suppose they could always be alternate timelines).

You need to continue this story during his school years and definitely after graduation!

When will story continue

The author was on Literotica back in June 2019. I've been away for about four+ years, so it's not too strange for an author to away due to real life issues. Hopefully he'll eventually be back to finish the series.

Yes. Hopefully he will return and has not died or moved on. This is a story not just disconnected sex. Something rare and very enjoyable, even on Literotica.

Great story, you should continue this with chapter 4 and include the officer from the previous chapters

So, what's going to happen with officer Debra Coles ? and what about his friend Sarah ? Will any of his other friends find out what's happening ...

Remarkable story. I truly hope that you close out this story as it is truly great writing with a fresh and fun storyline.

Please do more chapters

I wish the Author would write more chapters . I would like to see what Erin thinks about Officer Debra Coles.. But this was published back in 2008, so who knows what happened to the Author since then

Excellent !!!!! way too long but excellent. Continue and find a perfect guy or girl for Sarah? Would like to see her daughters reaction also

This story has a wonderful plot, but the repeated lengthy sex scenes get boring as hell. Also, the numerous typos arre distracting.

A bit of "superhero" unrealism, but hey, I always liked comic books. And the sex scenes here are masterful, AND I really like the characters. I do wish you'd come back with more someday - but thank you for this!

As has been suggested above, might another awesome author be willing to pick up this story? Many, many readers would really appreciate it.

Great story throughout all 3 episodes. Would love to have seen Officer Coles getting a good hard seeing too as one of his permitted lovers.

It's been about 15 years since this was published, I wonder what happened to the Author? I would of Liked to see hownthis continues

sort of over the top on the sex scenes but still good. Good guys that do the right thing do get rewarded.

I hope you plan on continuing this story. Romance and animalistic nature has been mixed very well. Curious to see how his life long best friend and now roommate will fit into the scene. The ideal of the professor and student getting married would be the perfect ending.

Let me join the others wishing you would come back and write some more chapters. Will Sarah get 'involved' with Erin and Justin? How about Officer Coles and Allison? What would happen if something awful hits home -- Justin falls for one of her daughters? Or he gets caught at school?

Please don't leave us like this; we need MORE STORY!

Just WOW, completely awesome from the start to this…

Please please more more more!! Thank you for sharing with us.

Please… please say there will be more!!!

I hope that a sequel is in the works!

Nicholas has not been back in nine years, what a terrible shame. Something had to have happened to him. This really could be one of those 10 or 12 chapter things that then became a fun novel and movie. It really did combine great sex with an actual in depth story. I thought it would be Sarah that would become the other woman, and perhaps that was planned before Nicholas departed. It was certainly the lost logical with the rich character build up. Perhaps she legitimizing the relationship and who know perhaps being the "wife" for the other two and even children for Justine. A really good woman author could take this much further. I can think of a couple on here with the depth and story telling ability to do so.

A last by the way: You do not have to be a "Super Stud" or "Super Hero" to perform as Justine did. :-) I do remember from my late teens to late twenties when with the right woman or women (usually an older woman such Erin) I could have sex three times with out fully loosing a "Useable Erection" and have sex sometimes ten or even on one occasion twelve times in one long night. I am CERTAIN there are many others as well in the right circumstance that can. :-)

JimDiamond. I can't agree more. I've been lurking on this site for years and this is the first time I've ever commented. This has been a fantastic read and I would love to read more. You know what else? I almost would like to see this in video format somewhere - Adult Swim or something... Nicholas is a FANTASTIC writer.

Fantastic series

EXCELLENT series!

Great characters, Great plot, und Brill Sex scenes!

11/10!!!!!

Very, very nice story, has everything in it that the readers need.

I especially like (1) the emotional investment each of the characters has in each other, and (2) that Erin realizes that she will take care of Justin, while their love for each other is preserved!

Being 19 years old, up through his 30.ca, Justin is in his prime, and will keep Erin happy, along with whoever is involved with them! I can really see Sara in there somewhere, and a stronger relationship between the three developing...after all, Erin does have her moving in as Justin's roommate!

I am sorry there is no sequel...it would be nice to see a follow-up to this.

FIVE STARS...A BLAST OF THEM, FOR A MOST ENJOYABLE READ!!

Does anyone have knowledge of what happened for this wonderful author dissappear? As for future sexual partners, most any of the named girl's could be welcomed, agree with the Sarah thoughts, and what about Officer Coles? My only negative, I thought he would be much more involved with his studies and work/research, etc.

What you have done here does not require just stars, but sun and moon, in writing effort. Your writing effortlessly takes the reader into a story one can visualize so easily, and as they read it is like watching a video in their mind. Between page 6 and 7 as I read, I felt a slump, until I started putting all the pieces you were planting for hopefully chapters to come. Sarah has taken on a larger role, and you painted more depth to her character, not only in her story, but actually in her body. Then there was Debra the police officer, and immediately I knew how tempted Justin was, knowing that in life, even though he was in love with Erin, the temptation might be too much, but now he has possible permission to go ahead. I was surprised by the actual involvement of Maia, however at she heard and saw them that first time there was an indication of more.. If Erin was real, I cannot imagine any man who would not want her. Great character. I was surprised that she did not make some comments about Justin's protection of Sarah, showed another bit to add to his gallant nature Erin experienced first with his care for her daughter at the accident, by such a young man far advanced for his years. Justin's depth grows by the page, although you do very well showing his vulnerability because of his age, and his fear of losing what only most men are lucky to dream and fantasize about. I love your work, and that is from a fellow writer of novels and poetry of romance and love. Yet, I will hate you if you do not continue with more chapters, for this surely could become a very good novel. BRAVO Nicholas !!!!!!! JEF

I keep checking back and rereading this in hopes that the #NicholasTemplar had decided to write another chapter to this Interesting story line. But it's been nearly a Decade since his bio has been updated, hopefully nothing bad has happened to him

The fact that this bio hasn't been updated is almost tragic.

Fantastic writing. The storyline, the characters, suck the reader in.

The sex is done with eroticism and polish.

Brilliant.

Wherefore art thou o Nickolas???? We want MORE

this guy has a knack for picking up broken toys

It's a shame that the author has never continued this. My thoughts are that Justin and Sarah end up married, as J is the only man she trusts, and Erin is too "old" for him. Erin is the lover of both of them.

I do need to say, however, that just like many other authors, Nicholas has a problem with ages.

Erin is 41.

-she's a full professor

-She has two daughters, both of whom are in their 20's, meaning she had to be about 18 when she had the eldest.

-Somehow she managed to have the full fun "college experience", including getting her education!, while raising two children. Paul, even if he was more caring initially in the marriage, would have been less than useful.

That's the biggest problem I have with this, and unfortunately it's endemic to stories here.

Still, fabulous work, and I'm sad it never got completed.

Remarkably coherent storytelling, who cares about a little chronological puzzle? Great!

Really nice story...!! Keeps you enthusiastic about the happenung.

But it's a shame that there aren't any more episodes of the story.

Justin has started a new chapter in his life. Ellie is some one who can help his dreams come true, keeping a watcg5ful eye. There are so many loose ends to reach their destination. What happen to Sarah ... what happened when she moved in ...!!

Who all come into the group

I wish n hope there will more of the episodes in future.

I fear that Justin's reservations about Erin's new plan for him to fuck other women are well founded. In fact, he should have refused sex with Maria at least until after he talked with Erin about it. She asked him if he didn't want to be rude to their guest. What about the extreme rudeness of springing her on him without discussing it first ? This smacks too much of her thinking she owns him and can just use him to pleasure her friends without even asking him. Her explanation after was somewhat better than this, but still begs several questions. She has an intimate relationship with Maria that she hadn't told him about? What about any others? She needs to approve anyone he's with? What the hell is up with that? He's giving her too much power in their relationship, and he doesn't have to. He could ruin her career, just like she could ruin his. And is she going to be fucking other women? What about other men? She didn't say, and he didn't ask. Maybe he will ask. Maybe he'll refuse her plan. There's a big element of her just using him for her fantasies. What about his wants and needs? He should talk with Sarah about this, and see what wisdom she could provide. In my opinion, he would be better off with Sarah for his mate. Erin seems a bit too crazy, and manipulative.

Definitely a rare story that has room for so much more! Will agree with Vanye on how I imagine things continuing.

I keep coming back to this story over and over. I think this is the 6th time I've read it over the years and love it. I REALLY would like to see this continue!!!

The desire, the devotion, the complete submission of Erin to Justin and her beautifully filthy dirty talk... goddamn she really is a goddess; the total package. Her husband is a complete moron for not realising what a priceless treasure he held and ultimately discarded. All the better for them though as they've found their soulmates. These two are so good together. I hope he gifts her with a child and they live happily ever after. :D

When the flashback to Sarah's past started I had this horrible feeling in my gut and hoped it wouldn't go that direction. Sadly it did. Why did it have to involve rape? Of all the horrible things it could have involved, why that?

When Debra was reintroduced and she starting getting friendly with Justin, I grew a little concerned. I mean not that I questioned his devotion to Erin, but you know, young males and hot women showing clear signs of interest, it's easy for their judgement to become temporarily clouded and for them to make, shall we say, mistakes that they will later regret. I hoped that Justin wouldn't make such mistakes. Thankfully she seems to be gone from the story as soon as she popped back in.

Wasn't a fan of the introduction of her friend Maria - especially without his knowledge. Not going to lie that felt so out of place given everything that happened so far. I would say this was a huge mistake on the author's part but I suppose he just couldn't resist with a threesome. Very disappointing. Consider if the tables were turned and it was Justin randomly introducing a friend. But hey when it's the guy on the receiving end I guess the expectation is to let it slide. Personally I would have immediately stopped and asked what the fuck was going on, and would have been hurt that she would do such a thing especially without talking to him. But I suppose I'm one of the few. I'm rather pissed because the story was pretty perfect until that point, but that one little thing almost killed my interest in the whole thing. Damn you!

Anyway, just so there's no confusion, I do enjoy seeing threesomes especially when they're as hot as the one in this story, but the reason I hated this particular one was simply because it was out of place, and the nature of how it was suddenly introduced and basically forced on Justin massively clashed with how the story and characters had been established thus far. As far as I'm concerned, it pissed all over it, totally undermining the supposed love and devotion between the 2 MCs as well as betraying trust. Well at least it was a great ride for most of it.

Personally I think it was just a male ego thing with the whole idea of having a woman that is devoted to you but lets and even wants you to sleep with other women, even taking part sometimes. I can see the appeal, but it just didn't suit this story in my opinion. The author even went so far as having her spew justifications for it, but it completely read as if it was a guy feeding the words. Nothing a highly educated women that is supposedly deeply devoted and in love with someone would say or do for the one she loves. Now don't get me wrong, objectively speaking there is SOME merit in what she's saying, but it reads like she's saying he needs to have certain experiences or else he's missing out. Who the fuck cares about these other experiences of great but ultimately empty sex with people he doesn't love? He has the one he loves. That should be enough. Evidently the author disagrees in this case.

love everything else about the story, but the part that fuck so many times without condoms doesn't convince me. but thank you for a great story anyhow