All Comments on 'My Erotic Story'

Although I never have read from this category, the title "My...." caught my attention. Being a guy, this is always a fantasy, even if those closest thing to participation is reading about it.

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This was a pretty good story. There was an occasional grammar or spelling error here and there, but nothing big enough to mention. Also, you might want to consider adding a bit more detail. Readers love detail. What bothered me was where it cut off! I would love to read more of this story :)

brilliant first story. this is going to be one awesome hot horny story i can see. reading this is like watch the two horny women both taking turns to lick you out do hope that you are going to write more parts of this very horny story.

Most enjoyable, especially watching the sisters in the back seat.

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