All Comments on 'My Fallen Archangel'

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masterhobbesmasterhobbesover 7 years ago
Really good

Shows tons of promise but a bit too short. I hope you continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
lol

better trump than the known criminal, who under Title 18 law regarding the destruction of government records is barred from holding any future office.

https://www.justice.gov/usam/criminal-resource-manual-1663-protection-government-property-protection-public-records-and

Subsection (b) of 18 U.S.C. § 2071 contains a similar prohibition specifically directed at custodians of public records. Any custodian of a public record who "willfully and unlawfully conceals, removes, mutilates, obliterates, falsifies, or destroys (any record) shall be fined not more than $2,000 or imprisoned not more than three years, or both; and shall forfeit his office and be disqualified from holding any office under the United States." While the range of acts proscribed by this subsection is somewhat narrower than subsection (a), it does provide the additional penalty of forfeiture of position with the United States.

but no biggie right?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Not bad not bad.

Good work hope to see much more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Started good but bad place to end a short first chapter.

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...

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