All Comments on 'My Family: My Cousin Ch. 01'

by linus_sunil

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GoldeniangelGoldeniangelover 18 years ago
I Liked It

I thought you had a very well-written and hot story,a nd I honestly rather liked the use of more than one language. I think it's rather ethnocentric and ignorant for people to insist on there only being English. You gave the translation and that'sa ll that mattered to me! Of course, without the translation I would have been upset that I couldn't understand what was being said, but you took care of that. I thought it was a very unique and original thing to do, and it made it kind of hot. I wish I knew how to pronounce some of this so that I could actually say it to people! lol... I'm sure I'd get a few interesting looks from my friends who speak the language =D Personally, I think it'd be neat if more people used another language in their stories the way that you just have, and I thank you for the interesting, erotic, and original read =D

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Oh my pussy is on fire. I want to know what happened next, soon. I want that cock in her pussy. I want his cock in my pussy.

maxsteelemaxsteeleabout 5 years ago
I would love to see more

This was a great continuation. I will love to read your dad finally getting to fuck Runadi, and maybe either your joining in, getting to fuck Runadi by yourself, or getting to fuck your mother, Shonadi or some lucky female.

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