by HenryClay
I always tag check first, and mid paragraph read a story, I love how your tags lie like hell...
to anyone reading this, the author PURPOSELY miss-tagged this story its FATHER SON not DADDY DAUGHTER...
wish there was some punishment for purposely miss-tagging a story
This is not my cup of tea. You should be ashamed of yourself for tricking us you sick bastard.
If you don't like the story QUIT reading it! There have been a lot of stories I've started to read and realized I either didn't like some aspect of it or the writing style. I just quit reading, that's the amazing thing about being human. Your right to choose. Myself, I LOVED this story and hope the author continues it and doesn't let a couple of apparently small minded "humans" discourage them. I see you were unhappy that you got tricked (LOL) but what did you think of the story? If you took the time to review it, hopifully you took the time to read it.
So what if it's mistagged... It's in the correct category. It is a good story line. I really like it. It seems incest/taboo stories are father/daughter, mother/son, sister/brother, & even sister/sister or mother/daughter... Not enough are father/son with love. Keep writing! Another chapter of this story would be good.
I found the writing and the scenario very erotic.
As for the story tags that are placed on the story, those are NOT necessarily ones provided by the author. If the author does not tag the story, literotica (either an editor or a computer program) sometimes adds tags on their own. I have no way of knowing the facts in this case, but I do know that the tags and categories are not always the ones chosen by the writer.
Having said that, I agree that the story should either be placed in the gay male section or a description should be very clearly placed right at the start so that readers do not get involved in a story with a theme that they find distasteful.
I didn't know the sex of the story teller until about half way through. It's fine to be incest/taboo catergory in my opinion. I enjoy reading certain types of stories and the tags and not revealing sex kept me guessing too long as if the author was tricking us into reading his story. So I understand some of the other comments. Some thought it was a waste of time and I tend to agree that it kept me reading longer than normal to discover the essence of the story.
I found this story very erotic. I'm a woman and would like to read more of this father and son.
I didn't know it was a guy until about half way through but I was still really turned on
You're going to make this a series, right? Not only did this turn me on, it made me cry from being sad and happy.
At first I thought you were mis typing things then half way thru the story is when I realize its not a "father daughter" stories and that's when I didn't even bother finishing. 1/5 star for your trickery and using wrong tags.
I also thought it was a daddy daughter sex story. i was like wtf when i discovered it was a son.
I lived this fantasy in my childhood, but never woke my step father up like you did. I took advantage of him and he never knew it. Looking forward to reading more!
i loved this story!! u are such a brilliant writer
i love every bit of it. this story is such a turn-on
please continue writing i cant wait to read part 2!
Okay, not to be a downer, but why are the tags for this story "father-daughter" when it is clearly "father-son"? I have nothing against reading gay erotica, but I have my likes, so I'm a bit disappointed that I was lead astray by the tags since I read it hoping for the father/daughter aspect of it... :(
Loved the story. Was excited to read the next story, but...
That was beautifully written
so sad you didnt continue writing :,(
hope you come back one day :D
Now I never comment on these but this was too good not to say anything. This was beautifully written and like poetry. You paint wonderful imagery with your words. Well done!
I keep coming back to this one. So beautifull and raw and perfect. If one day you come back to share more of your talent, I will be right here to read everything that comes out of your hands