All Comments on 'My Favorite Student'

I feel that this story could have been expanded a little further. You have the facts as they happened, added the sex (as you say) but why did you not go further with the fantasy now that you have gone over and above what actually happened? You have potential.

Given that you say everything is true bar the actual sex.. you're a pretty poor teacher too.. the prose was not up to scratch

This was nothing more than a teen masturbatory fantasy so I'll give you some credit for that. Your writing needs a LOT of work. Your grammar sucks and the plot development is nil. This is what we have editors for. Use one.

A good beginning, but it could be fleshed out more, with more details and not such a mad rush to climax.