All Comments on 'My First Cheat'

Just garbage thrown in by the cucks. By the way, there is no such thing as an "E" bra cup size. 42 just means the woman is fat, not that she has big tits.

Guess even fat whore s need strange dick

No other anon, it means she is fat/thick AND she has big tits!!!

As a large breastes female myself, there is such a size as 42E. I wear a 40H. Bras sizes go DDD, E,F,G,H. Look it up dumbasses.

as big as the bra size! So bad it hurts!

Pls continue with more details, were you on birth control? What happened after this, did it become a regular thing?

This is a perfect example of why writers should fill out their Bio page. If you really are female, instead of just writing from the female points of view it would add a lot of weight to some point that otherwise readers may want to write off as bad research or ignorance.

Your location would let us know if English was your first language, and in this case would make a big difference in your scores. In my viewpoint, if it is a second language you did a very good job and deserve a 3 or 4, however if English is your first language, you should get a 2 and then only because of your story telling ability. Your writing craft leaves much to be desired.

If you enjoy writing, as I do, don’t despair, you can fix your problems. Study grammar, study examples of other writers, keep writing and compare your lines with those of others. If you don’t understand what I’m talking about you can contact me through my bio page and I’ll rewrite a paragraph or two to show you what I’m talking about.

I didn’t score this story, but I do wish you luck. cd

Surprised 7 inches could even touch this "big" cheating slut. Really bad stuff.

Horrible crap. As others 42 E? Seriously she's FAT! The 42 is the inches around the chest! Grammar/spelling bad. And the first guy she meets is 7 inches? What are the odds? I know this is FICTION but reality and believeabiity is Important. 1 star

FireLizard13

Dont listen to the negertive comments. I think that was a very good story and i for one would like to read more. It is also nice to hear about the fuller figure lady. Well done looking forward to the next instalment.

"got lesser and lesser"? I can ignore typos, but not complete ignorance.

Hot stuff. Worked for me.

One Star.

but then they become more shallow as they come to surface, TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm a married man......and that was a hot story!